The my opinion, the most important factor that is the economic issue in the United States is umemployment. Unemployment is linked to the fall of companies in which have had a downfall because of the budget cuts within the state as well as the decline of the GDP growth. The GDP made a significant change in: companies, real estate, manufacturing goods, and stock markets were crashing into the pit hole of debt. With the GDP's mismanagement of money expensesit led to a total economic rumble. Now because of this economic rumble many companies were to be shut down and therefore many people were layed off as well as having people losing their jobs and now more than a quarter of the citizens in the United States are umemployed. You may be questioning yourselves how this occured and when it all started?
The recession in the U.S started apporixmately in the year 2001 and it all started because of the terrorist attack in the World Trade Center in New York city in the year September 11, 2001. Once the terrorist attacked the U.S our former president George W. Bush decided to go to war with Afghanistan in which made a huge impact in our economic status. Having to go to war with Afghanistan the government was unprepared and made unestimated decisions. The government invested the money that was given into the war expenses. Such as overloading the troops with weapons and other fighting resources and using the money unproperly. If the treasure of the state and the president analyzed how the money should have been spent this harsh recession wouldn't be occuring and we wouldn't be having umemployment and being in debt. Therefore, the United States government wasn't being responsible in managing the states budget and now the U.S is still in the recession and we are still fighting the war in Afghanistan.
Work Cited: David Leonhardt. "United States Economy". New York Times. New York Times Company, August 13, 2009. copyright 2009
Ms. Vega – First of all, be sure to double check and proofread your response before submitting it. You second statement is confusing. It looks like you are trying to be too fancy with your writing. In simple, yet specific terms, what do you want your reader to know? The unemployment rate for the United States is 25%? Double check your sources. The recession did not begin in 2001. Again, double check your sources. This has the potential to be a good response, but it is filled with spelling and grammatical errors making it tough to follow. This seems more like a rough draft. Proofread your response and make sure all of your arguments make sense and are followed by specific details to support your arguments. Organize your thoughts. Again, this has potential, but I think you just need to spend a little more time proofreading your work. This is a start, but expect to see improvements in your writing. Content 4; Organization 4; Total 24/36.
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